Feedback:
The lipsyncing is slightly off time in the first verse - Action: re-shoot footage
More performance is needed, possibly with a band set up. Performance should be more natural - Action: plan for shooting a band performance of the song.
More photos need to be taken for the website - Action: plan a day for a photoshoot
The dining table scene needs to be filmed with more performance - Action: plan for filming
IDEAS from this Feedback:
I am going to film a master shot of Hannah in the sea, more relaxed and expressive.
The band for my performance will be made up solely of Hannah alone. As the song builds up, she will get more agressive in her drumming and playing the guitar etc, with the climax enduring chaos.
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